Author's Notes:

Czar Squid, 19 Oct 2009 12:04 pm

I've always wanted to draw a fat yoshi :I

NewsAwesome, I'm starting to get fan art. The first one is made by Sushigummy, who made the cool little icon for the site (unlike the "W" I had before). The second one is done by my brother. I'm not sure where to find him :p Thanks guys, you've made my day.

Quick PollIf I had to improve any part of the comic, which should it be?
1)Improve the art on the background
2)Improve the character's looks
3)Improve on the special effects (like speed lines, and magic)
4)Change speech bubbles outlines to black
5)Give the characters improved eyes
6)It's fine as it is, no need for dramatic improvement.

I might consider it on the next few pages. So vote, and change the history of Wibble. Feel free to add anything to improve, I'm just going off the ideas on the top of my head.

Unrelated NewsZain, the black & white comic I've made last week. I've decided to color that bad boy in, so if you didn't like it because the lack of colors before. Now you can enjoy it. Yay.

User's Comments:

Vorquel, 23 Oct 2009 07:21 pm

Advice? Get better by practice. :D

SushiGummy, 23 Oct 2009 08:40 pm

It seems fine as it is, but for special effects like in the fifth panel, you could try making stuff like that white speed chunk a bit transparent, and blend a few of Zack's colors in there.

I feel sorry for the poor bastard who got hit with that fish.

JimLad, 24 Oct 2009 04:14 am

I'd have to vote 6
Everything is how it should be, just keep drawing and get better and better.
Be careful if you try new eyes, it can make or break the expression of a character imo. Personally I hate drawing eyes more than anything else.

PS: Master Sword!

MEEP GOD, 28 Oct 2009 12:01 am

TOSS THE STUPID ONE AT THEM!!!

Rawr101, 05 Dec 2009 08:15 pm

Can't Kirby press select or taunt to get out of his ability?
That's what they do in the Kirby games.

Czar Squid, 05 Dec 2009 08:35 pm

Yes, but normally Kirby has a mouth to regurgitate the ability. In this case, Kirby is a plant, and really can't remove the ability.