Author's Notes:

Czar Squid, 30 Jul 2009 04:45 pm

In soviet russia, squid loves you Oh Zack, will you ever stop to amuse me XD

A major change has happened to this comic. Well it's not my art style or a new feature on phototshop that I'm using... then what is it? The answer: New pens. I'm trying out some gel pens which is said to be just as good (if not better) as sharpie. So it came out very smooth, clean, and crisp.

User's Comments:

stella, 01 Aug 2009 11:10 am

Started reading yesterday This comic is really cool. I saw it yesterday and the art really grabbed me. You put a lot of time into this, and it shows. I never shade my comics. xD

Could you try making your panel borders a little thicker? Since they're close together there are times when you're very detailed with the background, but it's hard for me to tell the panels apart. I hope that sounded right.

Just trying to give out criticism. It's my job to help! =]

Czar Squid, 01 Aug 2009 03:10 pm

Thank you for your criticism. Sure, I can make the panel's thicker, I just need to use a thicker pen (or go over it a few times). I'm glad you like the art, it's where I do put my best effort into it. I'm gonna go over the last few pages and add some thickness to the panels.

EDIT: done and done :D

stella, 04 Aug 2009 06:29 am

That's so much better. =)