Author's Notes:

Czar Squid, 11 Feb 2009 02:56 pm

Agg, delayed. Sorry, I thought I could finish by last Saturday. Yet life got in the way. This comic is going to update kinda slowly, mainly because I'm doing one panel a day. So that the background looks good. If you guys have any suggestions to improving the background. Let me know.

Also I did do a little cut and paste in the last panel (But that's just nitpicking). I hope I can get the next page in by next week Wednesday. No promises though.

If the comic is TOO big, please let me know. I can always resize!

On a side note: I think crabs are funny, and "carcasses" are a funny word.

User's Comments:

SushiGummy, 11 Feb 2009 03:58 pm

Both true. No wonder he likes crab carcasses.

At the moment, the comic is a bit big, but that can easily be fixed if you just put 2 panels per row with 3 columns instead of 3 panels per row with 2 columns.

You know, portrait, not landscape.

And you didn't pluralize dentists in the second panel.

But besides that, it's good.

The third panel looks great.

And... If it's small hardly noticeable problems you're looking for, the speech bubbles could be improved upon.

For instance, they need to be a bit bigger, because at the moment the words look crammed in some panels. The font is a bit bothersome, a comic-like one would be more fun to read, maybe a bold font. Plus, the thickness of the word bubbles themselves are a bit thin while the rest of the comic has thick lines.

Edit: You're avatar just changed right before my eyes. I'll probably never recover.

Czar Squid, 11 Feb 2009 07:16 pm

Ok, I'll fix everything tomorrow. I'll make it 2x3, redo the text bubbles, and pluralize the D.

EDIT: All better. I just installed windows 7 (beta) and had a crazy load of fonts to use. I'm thinking of using color coded outlines for the speech bubble. You'll see the result of that in the next comic.